5 Most Valuable Minutes

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You talkin' to me?

I selected these 5 minutes as the most important because it contains his famous "you talkin' to me?" speech which highlights his hatred of the scum of New York, the very scum he wishes to wipe away, and states he has reached his limit and his breaking point. He believes that all of these low-lifers will continue to trash and dirty up his city, and rather than let that happen he decides he wants to flush everything away and start all over again, destroying the bad in an effort to create a 'perfect city' in the eyes of our anti-hero protagonist Travis Bickle, which would cause many deaths, thus revealing more of his anti-hero life. Additionally, there is a poster of Palpantine in his room, who is the first person that he told of his views of the city and his desire to flush away the scum. The fact that this is in his room shows that he hoped Palpantine could carry out his plan, but also shows he doubts the capabilities of Palpantine and that soon he counts Palpantine as an enemy as well. Next, there is a robbery at a local convenience store that Travis is shopping at, and Travis ends up shooting the robber, who happens to be African American. The director wanted to show the aspects of society, especially that of the stereotypes and racism of the time. Also, this showed the first step towards the climatic murder scene. This murder is the first major inclination of extreme violence in Travis, and verifies his hatred of scum, which he sees as mainly the African American community. After this scene, there is a scene of the t.v. which illustrates the loneliness of Travis, as watching the couples dancing together saddens him. After, there is a voice over saying 'we have suffered,' which refers to the Vietnam war, one of the greatest losses of American life in the history of the country, and Bickle is a discharged marine that served in this terrible war. All of these display the development of the anti-hero in Travis Bickle, and allow for his emergence as this anti-hero character that emerged following the Vietnam War.

The American Anti-Hero

The American Anti-Hero draws its roots from the effect of WWII on the US, as it caused the innocence of filmmaking to be shattered and sparked the need for darker heroes that were far from perfect, and could perform 'bad' or wrong deeds. Additionally, these anti-heroes feel like they need to rebel against the norms of society, and relates to the tragic period of the Korean and Vietnam wars, especially concerning the public reaction of rebelling to these allowed Hollywood to react and create characters that would follow the mood of the country, and that of real Americans as well. Also, the anti-heroes were supposed to portray the life of an average American, and the audience connects to these characters knowing from the start that these characters are doomed to a tragic fate or doomed to fail in their endeavors. In the 1960's and 70's these anti-heroes embodied the feelings of the average American at the time period, in addition to trying to find a new definition of the American spirit with each Hollywood production.

Intensified Continuity

In David Bordell's article, Intensified Continuity, he states that modern day Hollywood cutting consists of mainly fast paced cutting, as the ASL or average shot length has been decreasing since the 1960's and now rests at around 1.5, and "editing rates may soon hit a wall" as scenes will soon halt being long enough to watch as the images will just flash and all coherence will be lost, along with the continuity. Additionally, "In the studio years, a filmmaker would rely on the actor's whole body," stating that while filmmakers used to just rely on the actors, now they just use the actors as a face or as a name, because they can create continuity through the use of the varying angles of the camera and the different lenses they use. Now, "Today's camera prowls even if nothing else budges" and this allows continuity as the multiple camera angles allow a more complete perspective of the film to be formed creating a better viewer experience, while only losing ASL.  

Arrival of the Train vs Damsel in Distress

In arrival of the train, the camera does not make any movements whatsoever and maintains a long shot for the duration of the film which creates a nice index vector with the lines giving the shot depth, while in damsel in distress the camera doesn't make moves it just changes the location in which the shot is taken giving a message of distress that emanates from the actor. In the arrival of the train, there is no edit necessary as the people just get on and off the train, while in the damsel in distress, jump cuts are used to move from place to place in a relatively quick manner with the camera in the same shot for the duration of the short film. In the arrival of the train, the story is extremely straightforward and the display of the scene shows that with one continuous shot making up the movie, while in the damsel in distress the story is told through the many jump cuts and juxtapositions of the actors and how they move and interact with one another.

Advanced Editing Notes

Soviet Montage and Formalist Tradition

Pudokvin's concept of constructive editing is that every shot should demonstrate a new idea with a different point attached to the new idea. He believed that close ups, symbols, textures, and selected details were the only elements that filmmakers should use because they were the most intimate and demonstrated the most meaning. He disagreed with Griffith's use of close up saying they were too intrusive. Kuleshov was Pudokin's mentor and they both believed that juxtapositions showed more emotion than the actors themselves. The Kuleshov effect displayed that by changing what a character sees and how that character reacts make the audience either like the character more or less. Eisenstein believed in fragmented shots coming together to form a picture that contributes to the film but isn't linked. In the "Odessa Step" this type of montage is displayed through the many fragmented scenes that allow the audience to figure out that people are getting killed, but not much beyond that, especially when it comes to the characters.

Andre Bazin and the Tradition of Realism
Bazin did not like Classical and Formalistic editing styles because, in his eyes, these types of edit might destroy a scenes effectiveness and negatively change how the audience perceives reality. He thought both of these types of edit are harmful to the overall perception of the film by the audience, especially when he views Formalists as manipulative and Classists as corruptive. In their films, Realists strive for division, isolation, and separation. Some common Realist techniques include deep focus, long shots, wide shots, and a variety of revealing camera moves, and emphasize certain details in their shots.

Love or Money? Film Critique

Andrew Running

     The movie that I made with the help of three others was called Love or Money? Our group chose this title because in our film the main character is forced to choose between going on a date with a girl he likes (love) or go to a job interview (money). Since this was my first time making a film, I wasn't exactly sure what style we were going to experiment with as everything was new to me. We tried to make style resemble that of our movie inspiration Run Lola Run, using some elements, especially running. Our movie was geared towards a younger audience that can understand the difficulty of making a choice between work and play. I feel as if our concept for the movie was good, but the execution fell short.

One of the shots I had to redo because
of poor lighting and worked camera
in this shot as well

      My area of the film varied because we rarely had all of group together, so I had a little bit of work as the cinematographer, made some lighting judgements, helped with the shotgun mic, and even had a small acting part as well. However, that is only during the production. I also co-wrote the 2-column script and this helped me to have an idea as to what the movie will begin to appear like. Finally, I had my own edited version of the film, which was different than the version that was screened, and had some aspects that were better and worse than my own edited version.
 One problem was that we were constantly missing our cinematographer, causing us to need to juggle around some of the jobs so I had to do the camera work. An additional problem was that we had to retake many shots because the lighting was inadequate.

Simple pan with me working camera

Handheld shot (a little shaky)

     As for the missing group member, it was noticeable in the film where we had our cinematographer and where we didn't. Either my director or I had to step in to shoot, which was especially challenging for me with this being my first real encounter with having to use the camera. While I knew the functions of the camera, I had never had the pressure of having this work judged and be such an instrumental part of the project. Because of this, I kept to making only basic camera moves if I made any moves at all. Additionally, my skills with the camera were challenged as I was used to working with the tripod and was forced to take the majority of the shots handheld, which in the beginning lead to really shaky footage until I was able to get a better technique to steady the camera. Finally, we had some issues with lighting, something that I could fix. One problem of the lighting occurred outside where the sun was almost directly in-line with the top part of the camera lens, so I had the camera set up with the back towards the sun instead. Our other problem was inside on a foggy day. We had to turn on all of the lights because we were without the lighting kit and we had to try and create the illusion of a sunny day.

Should have been a calendar

When we finally got to shooting at the park

     For the group, a main problem was missing shots from the script. Missing shots always makes it harder to create an effective movie, but when the shots were some of the essential shots that set up the story and help make the story more believable the challenge level of fixing mistakes on post production jumped significantly. One of the shots that was missed was a beginning scene where it wasn't exactly a shot that was missing, but it was a prop (a calendar) that was meant to show that the date and interview are at the same time increasing the weight of his choice. Another missed shot was at the end, where our actress should have ran to the guy who got the job. This would have been a better climax to our movie and we would've had the comedic ending we desired. This would have made our protagonist Andrew wish he went to the interview instead. Both of these scenes were essential to have the film get the message of the power of choice. Unfortunately for us, there was no fix for these missing scenes as we were unable to shoot anymore because it took too long for us to realize this and we could not shoot anymore. Another problem that arose when we were filming was we were greatly limited in two ways: we could not maintain focus on the project for long periods of time and we the time we did have was short. To try and fix our focus problem, we tried to keep all distractions away from us, but we ended up just finding more ways to distract ourselves. For example, we had a scene to shoot at the park and while we were setting up a shot our actors started to fool around at the park and eventually the whole group joined in and we spent at least a half hour just messing around. Another time was when we signed out for the steady cam to try and get good shots of Andrew running, and everyone decided to try it out. This was a big distraction as Edward, Liz, and I each tried out the steady cam and burned quite a lot of daylight doing so and unfortunately forced us to hurry up some of the shots because it was getting dark. There wasn't much we could do to fix our lack of attention span since our preventative methods didn't work. Additionally, I think that if we had payed more attention we wouldn't have missed any of the shots making our film just better as a whole. The final problem we had lied in the fact that we had initial creativity conflict with our cinematographer and our director, causing a little bit of internal resentment and dissent between the two. However, they were able to work out their differences for the most part and put together a successful film. Consequently, if they had been able to work together we may have finished our script faster so that we could have had more time to shoot and not have had the pressure of time as much.

"dreamweaver" would've been here

     In the end, I thought that we were able to create a successful film. However, I know there were some areas that we could greatly improve upon, starting with the pre production. I feel like our initial script was good, but when we were getting feedback we didn't write down everything we heard so some of the suggested improvements were forgotten. Additionally, the entire group did not originally work well together. In the beginning of the pre production we did not put forth enough effort. Our film was short, but the short length was paced well for the most part. Our plot and characterization could have been greatly improved, especially if we would have used all of the scenes, especially that of the calendar which I stated earlier. Additionally, if we would have had a 'dreamweaver' sequence when Andrew looks up from his wallet it would have further developed his attachment to this girl he doesn't know very well. It also would have made it seem like the decision was a lot more difficult for our main character. I felt like our cinematography could have been better, as we did not have any particular frame that stood out as better than the rest. Another shot that could have been improved was the scene where Andrew collides with the bicyclist. We could have been closer and watched Andrew try and get out of the way or  not have him stay on the ground for so long to show his attempts to get to Grace as fast as he possibly can. Also, I would've liked to see the seen with the Grace and Andrew drawing closer slow down a little bit. In conclusion, for my first film project ever, I thought it was exceptional especially considering the importance of the shots we missed. Overall, I wish the process was a little faster and a little more smooth but I was glad to make this movie.

Trailer Review

The trailer I chose to review was Transformers. The narrative of the trailer shows a young male and young female working together, while also introducing both the good transformers and the bad transformers that have now chosen Earth to be their new battlefield. The stage is set for battle as the first encounter between the humans and an evil transformer occurs at a military base, and the humans are perplexed as to the cause of the attack on their military base.

The cinematography in the trailer contains mostly LS and CU. The LS mostly show the impending danger that the group will have to face, human and robot, and to also detail the destruction that these mighty machines can cause; the reaction to this damage is also shown. Additionally, the CU are used to show emphasis on a situation, especially one with increased danger or intimacy. These scenes are common in an action thriller sort of movie so it is only natural that they would appear in the trailer as well.
The editing in the trailer uses a lot of jump cuts and flashes images quickly across the screen to get the most out of the 1:59 time frame. Many of the shots run together as the images flash as a type of transition between one clip and the next. Additionally, there are text images that help to show the direction of the story and what will happen. The editing makes sure to show the most eye-catching images and most destructive scenes to capture the attention of the viewer.
The audio in the trailer consists partially of dialog, but mostly of a techno mix that is rounded out by a scattered noise that is played when the images are shuffled. The music helps to amplify the danger that is created by the images. Finally, the beat of the music is matched with the changes in the images on the screen, adding an affect of increased tension to end the trailer with the title of the movie and a chilling background music.

Run Lola Run Presentation Critique

My group thought that motion was an important part of the film Run Lola Run, as Tykwer himself stated that the movie was based off of the simple action of a woman running. Our belief was that the motion aspect of the film included not only the movement of Lola running, but also included various general movements as well. Unfortunately, the group did not make mention of blocking as we did not know what it was. The slides that we presented were spinning, slow motion, fast motion, split screen, flash forwards, and just motion in general. 

The strengths of our presentation lied within the uniqueness of our examples and the layout of our slides. All of our screenshots represented motion in some form, and most of our examples were those of which were not used in other presentations. Additionally, we were able to analyze the examples we chose in response the their actual effects on the plot line and the effects they had on smaller characters like Lola's father, or bigger characters such as Manni.

Unfortunately our project posed an impressive challenge because our group was all first year students so we did not really know what to talk about or what to fill up our powerpoint with. I felt as if even though I knew the material, I read straight off of my note card because I was afraid I would forget about what I needed to say. Additionally, because we are first year students, we don't have a good grasp of the film vocabulary. All of these factors made it difficult for us to fill up the 15 minute time allotment. It would have been better if our group had included some more information about the director and a little bit more background knowledge as to why the film was so focused around motion, and maybe a few more direct quotes from reviews of the film or even Tykwer himself to help focus our presentation a little more.

Short Film Treatment: The Interview

This is it. The job I've always wanted. I still have 3 hours before the appointment at 1pm but i want to get there early to assure that nothing will go wrong...
Hmmm it takes around 5 minutes to get there and I'm leaving 2 and half hours early? I have plenty of time....
CRASH

Ah! watch where you're going my car already just got ran into. Ugh whatever I'll just call a tow truck I still have 2 hours before my appointment.
He dials the number... Hello? yes hi i need someone to come out and tow my car.

muffled noises are heard and Tom hangs up the phone in disgust.
It'll take them one hour to get here!? i guess that's okay I'll still have an hour and a half to get to my appointment and it will only take me 10 minutes to walk from here so I have plenty of time still right
(Tom begins meticulously rubbing his hands together)
This is taking to long I'm just going to leave and walk for my appointment 
(The clock above strikes 12pm)
I better hurry now I only have an hour to get there.... even if it only takes 10 minutes to walk... oh well
his first step lands him on the ground with his face laying down and his pants soaked from the puddle
I can't present myself like this i need to run home and change! what does my watch say... 12:05?!?! how long have i been laying here...
It doesn't matter I need to get there I have goals and I need to accomplish them!
Gotta find clothes gotta find clothes found some!
Okay time check... 1230! I gotta run now
huff huff huff huff huff theres the building i can stop for a break now. I Wonder what the time the clock in the building reads
Tom walks into the lobby and asks the receptionist for the time she informs him it is 12:55
Oh no I'm going to be late!
He runs up the stairs and scales 5 flights of stairs and bursts into the room panting and realizes he's in the wrong building!!!
12:58! he runs down the stairs out of the building and enters next door and runs up 5 more flights of stairs and throws the doors wide open and his eyes focus on the clock on the far side of the room it reads 1:01
I'm late!!!
He runs into the office of the hiring manager.
The manager takes one look at Tom and gives him the job on the spot without any interview
The manager simply states that anyone who goes through this much chaos and this much stress has the just the determination we look for here. There is no need for an interview if Tom already displays all the qualities that we idealize here.
Tom is elated and begins prancing around and knows that it became his determination that got him the job, but time certainly helped to complicate matters.

Character in Time

I was done with it. I'm done with everything. I can't balance it all anymore. I'm no longer the best. I was always that person that everyone looked up to and thought had the perfect life. I was good at every sport, limitless possibilities for my education, until i finally snapped. It seems like it happened yesterday... I started my day like any normal day, until I was blindsided while on my way to school. I always have the same route, why would this day be any different. It all happened so fast, I was walking, then I was on the ground being yelled at and tormented. I am left on the ground with physical wounds that would heal, but I am never going to be able to forget the things that were said or the emotional gashes that are left. When I finally arrived to school my life was left in tatters. I knew i wasn't perfect. I could never go back to living my life like before. Now I am left as a shell of my former self, without any reason to try and regain my former form. It is now that I have chosen to instead walk the streets just waiting for my life to take it's course. Until I was walking around town and saw some of my former friends. I just decided that I'd walk faster than to face them. I couldn't relive my failure or erase the scars. I was so caught up in my despair that i didn't notice the curb and fell over. I hunched over and went into a ball and just cried and cried. I didn't expect my friends to come over and check if I was okay. I didn't expect everyone to come and tell me everything is okay and that they missed me. I decided I may not be perfect but at least I can always be respected, no matter what happens.

Day in Paris

The short film that I decided to view was called A Day in Paris by Benoît Millot , which starts by showing an airplane arrive at an airport and then cuts to an airport terminal with a suitcase moving on its own. When the suitcase opens, it reveals a robot which becomes the character we follow. As the title ensues, we follow a robot on his adventures on a day through Paris. 

This short film uses phenomenal camera work to help show how the robot tries to make a difference in the lives of many in the big city. The beginning shots have most of the action moving towards the camera or in the general direction of the camera, but as the suitcase robot enters the scene, there is a brief use of a tracking shot to follow the suitcase until it speeds out of the shot. Once the suitcase stops, the robot enters from the right third of the screen towards the left and we have an extreme close up from the bottom of robot, tilting up which could suggest that the robot was off to do great things. The camera then has more tracking shots, but seems to be in the perspective of the robot as it passes by areas of Paris. Then the robot appears briefly, then more importantly is shown appearing from the left third to stop the traffic and allow the citizens to walk across the street at which time a brief shot from the back of the head of some citizens in rack focus with the cars and then shifts to the feet of the citizens to a medium shot of the citizens walking. After, the shot moves to various shots that tilt and others that move across from right to left watching a woman take a picture then shifts to a still picture of boats on a river. 

These boats are being observed by the robot which appears to be resting after a hard period of work. After the brief respite, the camera shifts towards another shot at the feet of some citizens as they work their way onto a train. We then see the robot riding the train and then view a construction site while the workers are pouring concrete as the robot flies by in an action shot that takes the viewers attention and then we have numerous shots out of focus or vehicles traveling on the z-axis towards the camera as the angle shifts again to the robot who is this time directing cars into a parking garage.We find the shot in selective focus as the focus shifts from the robot to the cars entering the garage. After this shot, a child is viewed playing in the sand as the robot uses a crane arm to also pick up some sand and cheers up the child. After, the robot goes through a toll booth and then through a tunnel, after which we see him zoom by the cars through selective focus yet again and then passes many buildings and emerges for the final scene in the middle of an open grass field at which point the camera shifts into deep focus and catches a long shot of the robot as it shows the pictures of all the people it helped during the day, and the camera flies into a specific shot of two construction workers that he viewed during the day.
The director uses a variety of shots in rack focus and selective focus and the meanings behind the shot as displayed in the third screen shot to draw importance to the main character. Also, the focus is used to draw attention to the next destination for our 'hero.' Additionally, the director uses few close ups, and only uses them to draw immense attention to a small detail such as the face of the robot, which defines the style of the director. Finally, the director uses the rule of thirds and rarely keeps an object stationary, as the objects usually travel on either a left to right or right to left trajectory on the x-axis.
 A Day in Paris, does not exactly fall into one category, but most commonly aligns with the drama genre. The use of a main character in a plot that concerns helping others. While the majority of the film shows little to no suspense, the viewers are left ruminating over what will finally stop the robot, and as the robot emerges into the grass field, the final scene is created with a sense of immense tranquility to finish up this piece that ends up as a film that comes of as a childish and cute drama.